Omid Abbassi

advisor

https://www.bme.hu/

Iranian

"Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more

Dear Karolina Sepot and Kamila Majerska,

Thank you for submitting your project to the INSPIRELI Awards. I have reviewed your entry and would like to provide feedback on both the strengths and areas for improvement:

*Strengths:

1- Simplicity and Clarity of Concept: Your project demonstrates a strong understanding of a simple need and effectively addresses it with a clear and well-formulated question, leading to a thoughtful design solution.

2- Smart Utilization of Space: The smart use of space within its limitations and the well-organized spatial planning, incorporating modules and standards, are commendable aspects of your design.

*Areas for Improvement:

1- Design Process and Conceptual Clarity: Including the design process and idea diagrams would enhance clarity and provide a better understanding of the project's development path.

2- Technical Drawings and Documentation: More comprehensive technical drawings such as sections, elevations, and detailed explanations of technical solutions and material schedules are needed, especially for an interior design project. This would ensure a thorough understanding of the project's execution and feasibility.

By addressing these points, your project can further enhance its clarity and completeness, ensuring it meets the judging criteria effectively.

Best regards,
Omid