Малика Абаева
student
Kyrgyz Russian Slavic University
Kyrgyzstan
Architektura
Why the "CIRCLE"? Everything has a beginning and an end, and only the ring is a vicious circle. a symbol of the course of life. Continuous circulation… more
FIKRESELAM GEBREWAHED FISSEHA
advisor
addis collage
Ethiopia
- Context Based Architectural Design - Urban Design and Sustainability- Landscape Design - Housing… more
Dear Малика Абаева
Your project on design of "Residential complex "CIRCLE" in Bishkek" looks really good.
my minor comments for improvement are stated as follows
1. You should improve your plan presentation skill because the shadow effect on your typical plan is not clear to understand because of the unnecessary shadow effect. Hence, it is very difficult to give detailed comments on the plan. Moreover, you have mentioned that the plan is typical however it is not clear on which floors that this plan will become typical you should have mentioned the floor level or floor number that this plan becomes typical plan.
2. Observing from again your typical floor plan the inner corridor doesn't have any ventilation or light unless you provide an artificial (ventilation and light) which might be okay. Some of your bathrooms in your plan also doesn't look ventilated as well.
3. On Your plan mentioned as "The plan of underground floor" you have mentioned that there is a ramp provided however ramp (slope %) and direction of the ramp as well as the functionality is questionable you could have shown it in a detailed section to show that it really works. On such basement plan there are other important functions are missing such as (waste collection spots). how this waste is collected.
4. You have mentioned that "The 13th and 14th floors consist of a "CIRCLE" that connects all the blocks of the building". If the purpose is only connecting only your concept becomes very shallow. Moreover, it would have been very good if you provided the plan of this circle. because your overall concept for the project revolves around this circle. Hence you should have provided the detail plan, function and structure of this circle.
5. You need to work on your site plan and landscape making as well.
6. It will also be better to show how your proposed project fits with the context in your 3-dimensional views.
Best wishes.