PROJECTS FEEDBACK
Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.
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I am very glad to see that the classification of senses and the activity area can be clearly analyzed and combined, which is undoubtedly a very beneficial thing for the visually impaired. The sensory understanding shown in the picture is also in place, as well as a reasonable understanding of relevant laws and regulations. What I want to say is that as a project with very practical needs, We may need to pay more attention to the understanding of some small scenes. For example, some scenes…
QingYang Jia
advisor
The starting point of the project is uplifting, to commemorate the nameless victims, and I think there is nothing wrong with the design process of the monument, but the expression could perhaps be a little more emotional, especially as an emotional structure, the notebook style may not be able to convey the emotional connection of war, reflection, grief in the first place. The treatment of the landscape is very good, but as an overall design you have to consider its response to the monument. I…
QingYang Jia
advisor
There is little sense of intrusion into the building, and it is better to have frames for intrusion. The legibility of the plan is low
Amir Kolivand
advisor
The use of transparent glass canopies creates heat in the environment. The use of plant canopies provides the possibility of creating better spaces
Amir Kolivand
advisor
Among several projects under - Schindler's Ark Saving Competition - that I reviewed I think your project closely follows the theme and overall context of the region. I like your process diagram and how you intend to maintain the overall look and appeal but the project could have been even more interesting if you had incorporated the actualities more strongly. History informs us that the place was used as a factory first for textile and later for enamelware; I strongly believe that traits of…
Himanshu Sanghani
advisor
It is an interesting project and I like the way you have strategically created eight zones for the site but somehow I feel that the critical potentials of this project were undermined. I agree that the lake is nearly 350 sq.km of area and offers a blend of diversified ecology; however, critical aspects were missed and the solutions failed to provide judicious evaluation. If you had studied key limnological variables you would have realised that water transparency is zero and the amount of…
Himanshu Sanghani
advisor
Your project holds a significant value. The site requires much needed refurbishment as it has been in a lot of controversies but I feel the approach you have taken to re-establish the identity does not hold the strongest value or support the northern region of the site. I feel you should have chosen the programs for the site very carefully by understanding the context thoroughly. In last decade many of the news agency and/or reporters or agencies have mentioned that the space hold the highest…
Himanshu Sanghani
advisor
This is a very interesting proposal. However, please also consider the location of the exits on the ground floor. It would be beneficial to highlight more about the procedures for elderly evacuation, as they might not be able to bring themselves down easily. Will there be assistance available for them, not just in the form of ramps but also elevators for their daily activities? Additionally, have you considered the distance to medical services and the accessibility of ambulances within the…
Vannesa Grace Cabiedes
advisor
Your project is quite interesting, but it's important to consider who the potential users will be. Will it cater to the elderly, students, families, or a combination of these groups? It's great that you're focusing on sustainability and using locally available materials, but you should also think about the long-term maintenance of these materials. In terms of sustainability, carefully consider the year-round activities of each user group to ensure that the project remains viable for more than…
Vannesa Grace Cabiedes
advisor
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